Log in

No account? Create an account
Chaotic Chaos! 
07:45am 17/04/2006
mood: content
Since i'm new, figured i'd post this. :3

._. This is sad. That writing's not half-bad it's just.. My god who INVENTED THIS?

Story Or Series Title: Why do I feel the need to protect her?
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Author's Name:  Chaos Faith

Full Name (plus titles if any): Chaos. No surname is given.
Full Species(es): Human,
Hair Color (include adjectives): Elbow length,really thick,and never bushy and only curled with crurling irons,thick dark brown hair.
Eye Color (include adjectives): Icy blue,feel like they can look into your soul...
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None given.
Special Possessions (if any): none said.

Annoying Origin: Though it's not said we can assume she's from Destiny Island.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Riku so far.
Other Annoying Traits: N/A

(( Why do all Mary-Sues call their father Daddy? ._. ))

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:


(The Keyblade chooses you)

not really a sue, but... 
04:50pm 08/02/2004
  ok, i profusely apologize for the fact that this isnt a real mary sue. but still.. plotlines are horrible, no grammar.. etc. -_-

Lina-San's Fanfic Page

a horrible part of this storyCollapse )

i am T3H dead from reading this.

(5 Chosen Ones | The Keyblade chooses you)

10:12am 24/10/2003
mood: crazy
Flikfreak is the most popular gal to write Mary-Sues.. I snagged this one. Funny.. All her OCs are named Heather.

Story Or Series Title:
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Culprit Author's Name: Hell Spawn Demon Bitch Flikfreak

Full Name (plus titles if any): Heather Maxwell <-- Gee.. all her 'Sues are named "Heather".
Full Species(es): Hell Spawn Demon Bitch Human
Hair Color (include adjectives): Blonde Hair
Eye Color (include adjectives): SKy Blue Eyes
Unusual Markings/Colorations: Never said
Special Possessions (if any): Key Chain

Annoying Origin: She is from Hawaii and she reminds me of a carbon copy of Lilo.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: KH cast
Annoying Special Abilities: Heather seems to be a carbon Copy of Lilo.
Other Annoying Traits: A copy of Lilo?

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

Just Like Lilo...Collapse )

Cut off hereCollapse )

(5 Chosen Ones | The Keyblade chooses you)

Hikari is overused, isn't it? 
05:22pm 16/10/2003
mood: annoyed
Ooh, look, she even included an annoying POV KEY. *shudders*

"Me(Alana): *~*
Riku: -^-
Sora: ~*~
Words: #=#
(Oh, shuddup, spell check. >:-( )
>Yadda Yadda> is thoughts. (Blah Blah Blah) is me."

Yeah. That would help, eh?

Story Or Series Title: Lean on Me
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Culprit Author's Name: Alana Hikari-chan Somehow, "Alana Light-chan/good friend suffix doesn't sound as cool as when it's in Japanese form. Hikari is indeed overused, no? Why never KAGE?

Full Name (plus titles if any): Alana Biiiiig surprise, eh?
Full Species(es): Human
Hair Color (include adjectives): "her golden-bronze hair swings, like satin or silk"
Eye Color (include adjectives): "her eyes are like the rocks of the secret place, a beautiful blueish grey"
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None
Special Possessions (if any): None

Annoying Origin: Not given, but obviously Earth.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Riku immediately falls in love with her, or at least begins to... yaaay.
Annoying Special Abilities: She knows all about Kingdom Hearts' plot and freely gives it away to the characters that will be acting it out.
Other Annoying Traits: Riku loves her immediately, she's a good fighter "for a beginner", and is the typical beautiful, all-knowing Mary Sue.

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

Riku l00000vez m3!Collapse )

(8 Chosen Ones | The Keyblade chooses you)

02:55pm 09/10/2003
mood: annoyed
Story Or Series Title: The Origin and Adventures of Zenya
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Culprit Author's Name: Blue Notebook

Full Name (plus titles if any): Zenya
Full Species(es): Homo Sue-ien
Hair Color (include adjectives): "She had short brown hair and two tiny strands of hair that were shorter than the regular length"
Eye Color (include adjectives): blue
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None mentioned
Special Possessions (if any): Bow, arrows, fairy named Kila that was a Mercury doll, an orange pencil with black ghosts, cats, and jack o' lanterns printed on it

Annoying Origin: Our universe, allegedly
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Travels around with Sora, Donald, and Goofy; works for the King
Annoying Special Abilities: Archery, uses "Blue Notebook Power" to send herself & Sora to the Sailor Moon universe
Other Annoying Traits: The Queen of Hearts doesn't see her, calls Usagi Serena Tusikino, uses Japanese names for Ami & Rei but American for the rest

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
This is a letter from Chapter 3.Collapse )

I didn't feel like tackling her little friend. Just too much Sue for me. -_-

(2 Chosen Ones | The Keyblade chooses you)

Why oh why does thia author not listen? 
09:36pm 08/10/2003
  Story Or Series Title: Once Upon A Full Blue Moon (Once upon a full blue moon, a repeat offender Sue author defied canon and the KH storyline)
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Culprit Author's Name: COCA-COLA-PIXIESTIXS (formerly known as Kaiulani89, the author of "Return of Evil")
Full Name (plus titles if any): N/A
Full Species(es): Sue who belongs to author who defies canon and the KH storyline
Hair Color (include adjectives): N/A
Eye Color (include adjectives): N/A
Unusual Markings/Colorations: N/A
Special Possessions (if any): N/A

Annoying Origin: N/A
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: N/A
Annoying Special Abilities: N/A
Other Annoying Traits: N/A

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

The Sue doesn't appear until the next chapter, which isn;t out yet, but this block of text doesn't help matters any betterCollapse )

Oh, and by the way, I have now posted chapter 2 of "Untitled, for sanity's sake" at ffn.

Chapter 2

Don't ask about the formatting. FFN and Word are messing it up.

(1 Chosen One | The Keyblade chooses you)

I know this is not khsues related, but... 
09:10pm 02/10/2003
mood: amused
...I could care less.

I need some lj codes.

One to create an icon journal, and another to create another character journal for lost_kingdom

So cough 'em up.

Er...I mean...

*puppy dog eyes*

Please?? I draw really cute fanart, plus I make icons. Not fancy icons, but icons nontheless (I nominated three of my own icons at the_icon_ritz

Oh yeah...

I need a mod for this place.

Any takers?

(1 Chosen One | The Keyblade chooses you)

White hair...pink eyes? Hm...sounds normal. Eyes change black? Nevermind... 
05:48pm 27/09/2003
mood: accomplished
Not too sure about this.

Story Or Series Title: Kuroi Eyed Rurouni
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Culprit Author's Name: knshn4eva (goody, a fan girl, and we can only imagine what she's a fangirl of)

Full Name (plus titles if any): Not given
Full Species(es): N/A
Hair Color (include adjectives): "White locks fell from her shoulders" (um...does this mean her hair starts at the shoulders?)
Eye Color (include adjectives): "bright pink
eyes", but they turn black when around Heartless, which causes their eyes to turn pink
Unusual Markings/Colorations: I would say white hair andpink eyes, but that would be considered somewhat normal in the KH universe, eh? Well, except for the whole eye color turning to black thing.
Special Possessions (if any): A emotionless expression, and blank eyes. "She raised her hand as to pick up a chalice and a long deep
purple blade appeared in her hand. The blade was extremely sharp at one
end, as to look like cutting through steel. On the other end however, was a
key. It looked just like Sora's except Sora's wasn't jet black.". (So, she has a Keyblade...)

Annoying Origin: the deepest, darkest pits of hell Who knows?
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Sora wants to run his hands through her hair; she attacks Kairi
Annoying Special Abilities: Keyblade? Has a connected to the Heartless?
Other Annoying Traits: Ehehe...I'll get back to you on that.

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

Chapter 1Collapse )

Chapter 2Collapse )

Chapter 3Collapse )

BTW, I left a review to "Return of Evil". I have yet to recieve the dreaded "l33t riddled flame of dooom" from her.

(5 Chosen Ones | The Keyblade chooses you)

Suteki da Ne 
02:52pm 24/09/2003
mood: aggravated
So...you guys remember the Sue I reported over at marysues, right? The one who was half cat or something, and had Riku falling for her instantly? The one that was an interactive fic?

Well, like any good Sue author, the author has not listened to any reviews made that suggested she learn proper grammar and such.

Even though none of these reviews were flames, she called these reviewers flamers, and she is continuing the story, and asking for more Sues and Stus.

*grabs a spork*

Suteki da ne (Wonderful, isn't it?)?


codfishbunnyYou're right. Suteki doesn't mean "Wonderful"

So...the correct phrase is-

Subarashii da ne

(5 Chosen Ones | The Keyblade chooses you)

10:46am 23/09/2003
mood: blank
I'm new here...

I discovered the biggest Kingdom Hearts Mary-Sue Writer. Her name is FLikfreak.


She blames are problems for writing Mary-Sues.

(4 Chosen Ones | The Keyblade chooses you)

01:25am 22/09/2003
mood: stressed
I'm not sure what to make of this "Aura" character, especially after the author mentions .hack//SIGN, X-Men: Evolution, and whatnot.

Story Or Series Title: Daughters of Darkness (this is already sounding suspicious)
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts, Dark Cloud, X-Men:Evolution, Yu-Gi-Oh, and the author "promises" more to add to this crossover
Culprit Author's Name: MistralMikasha and MikoIshtar

Full Name (plus titles if any): Aura, "Angel"
Full Species(es): Human, I suppose
Hair Color (include adjectives): "silver hair which reached her waist"
Eye Color (include adjectives): "ocean blue eyes"
Unusual Markings/Colorations: n/a
Special Possessions (if any): Blades (weapon)

Annoying Origin: Like I even want to know
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Ansem's daughter. Trained by Leon and Cloud. Friend of Aerith.
Annoying Special Abilities: N/A
Other Annoying Traits: She's 11, Ansem's daughter, and possibly a future love interest for a canon character.

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

Where's Daddy?Collapse )

They have the internet?Collapse )

Maleficent had a daughter!?Collapse )

She has a Keyblade. Also, two more Sues ae mentionedCollapse )

There were other Sues, but I felt like only reporting this one. Read the fic to find the other Sues.

(15 Chosen Ones | The Keyblade chooses you)

01:10am 22/09/2003
mood: accomplished

Using some icon images destinysdiamond made, I put together this icon for the community.

Meh...I'm new to this animation thing...

It's the best I can do for now...

(2 Chosen Ones | The Keyblade chooses you)

11:43pm 20/09/2003
  Story Or Series Title: The Sorrowful
Culprit Author's Name: LaughingAstarael
Note: Crossover with Garth Nix's trilogy. ...

Full Name (plus titles if any): K'Strael, also called "Kael."
Full Species(es): Human, of the Old Kingdom persuasion
Description: "Her ebony hair was highlighted with blue in the lamp-light, so black you could almost imagine falling into it. Her frame was small and seemingly delicate, but he could sense a power about her that belied her slight frame. Her outfit was nothing fancy, a loose midnight-blue tunic with a long skirt of the same color. The skirt was slit up to her hips for easy movement, and underneath it was a shorter skirt of black. It was nothing fancy, but in the back of his mind he was thinking a potato-sack would look good on her. Her boots were comfortable and worn, and obviously well made."
Unusual Markings/Colorations: A Charter Mark on her forehead.
Special Possessions (if any): A sword with the Charter, the seven freaking bells of an Abhorsen, an angsty past, a dead boyfriend, a crazy sister, and Riku's inexplicable love.

Annoying Origin: From The Old Kingdom, the older daughter of an Abhorsen and a Clayr. Her pa died when she was young, but she didn't and doesn't care, so one wonders why she bothers mentioning it. Was Abhorsen-in-Waiting, fell in love with a Necromancer, her sister killed him, she killed her sister (and didn't care), ran away, got picked up as a minion by Malicifent. Sister gets found and healed by their ma, goes batshit insane and stalks her. Whee!
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Randomly picked up as a minion by Malicifent, becomes Riku's twoo wuv, kills Sora.
Annoying Special Abilities: Uses Charter Magic, Free Magic, the seven bells, and is a "Remembrancer." As far as I can tell, that last one has precisely jackshit to do with the story. Makes Riku be an annoying sop.
Other Annoying Traits: The author makes Kairi go nutso, which drives Sora into a rage and makes him go insane, which results in "Kael" killing him. All of this is, as far as I can tell from her horrifying Author's Notes, is because she doesn't like them. She also seems to think Sora can't beat anyone on the Destiny Islands. I think she wasn't trying. Pbbthpt.
Also has the amazing ability to write pretty damn good, but make characters OOC, have a Sue OC, and have the most retarded Author's Notes ever.

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
In which Kairi is nuts and Sora goes mad.Collapse )

(8 Chosen Ones | The Keyblade chooses you)

Our first Sue 
12:07am 21/09/2003
mood: accomplished
Cross-posted at marysues

Twu Wuv!!!!111!!!!1one!!!!111 *gags*

(The Keyblade chooses you)

11:59pm 20/09/2003
mood: accomplished
We are now open for business!

(3 Chosen Ones | The Keyblade chooses you)